Friday, 1 August 2014

show don't tell

PURPOSE to describe

WALT show not tell in our writing

last week we were doing show don't tell can you guess what emotion this character is feeling
last week we were learning how to show a emotion with out telling the adonis  
next time I should do better at writhing more 
what I think I done well was describing what the character felt like

She bit her fingernails as she was frozen like a statue she started to curl into a tiny little table tennis ball .With her lips glued together.Thinking of what will happen when she gets out of this huge mess….