Monday, 6 October 2014

My lego story












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once upon a time there was a boy named Josh and a girl named ataahua they followed a lady that looked familiar to ataahua she walked them to the forest of doom they ask ‘’where are we going’’ she replied ‘’we are going to the forest of doom’’ what we are scared of the forest of doom.
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Then snakes started to slither
around Josh he started to scream and something started to climb up ataahua she thought that her brother was tickling her then she saw Josh in the circle of snakes
‘’ohno’’it’s a taranchula ’haaaaaa’’  ‘’It a sp sp sp spider get off go go jump off’’ they were doomed.
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‘’come on josh lets get out of here’’
‘’you are so right ataahua’’ well what are you waiting for let’s get out of here so they ran and ran and ran until they out of the forest of doom we were lucky to get out of there alive are you serious I was being funny haha.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Lerisah-Joe awesome story,little bit of mistakes but other than that your story is amazing.
    What happened to the lady that looked similar to Ataahua?To improve your story you could read over it and see if it makes sense and take a look at you punctuation.
    From Gerry.

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  2. Hey Lerisahjoe I like your lego building it is very awesome and cool.From Letisha

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  3. hey lerisah its me again kirihiria. i love your lego buildings they are so creative, talking about the photos the last one whats the problem? not too many mistakes. You are such an academic young girl. great job!!! :-D

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