Wednesday, 15 October 2014

My Holiday

" morning dad " I jumped into my shorts and then we went to skate park. Then my dad called us to go to him he  told us " told us to go to the beach".We went home so we could pack some food
and togs so we can splash in the water . I didn't get wet . I was the one who found the big juicy pipis. Everybody was happy. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lerisah-joe I like your work but you should not repeat words over and over again.


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  2. hey lerisah, i think you should let your teacher know before you put it on your blog, huh. Besides that i liked your story. But you should edit it first then publish. Marama.

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