I am a Year 5 student and Kaikohe West School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 17 and my teacher is Miss Newton.
Hi Lerisah-joe I like your work but you should not repeat words over and over again.
hey lerisah, i think you should let your teacher know before you put it on your blog, huh. Besides that i liked your story. But you should edit it first then publish. Marama.