You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.
Describe a time we were successful
Have you remembered…
- start with something that was said or thought
- Use punctuation (capital letters to start sentences and names and fullstops to end)
- to put everything in the right order
- use describing words and lots of detail.
- Re-read it to check it makes sense
don’t make a mistake’’I thought in my head I was do the bongos at Room 17’s assembly at tawharanui. First Room 17 was sitting so lovely sitting on the stage.Next some girls done a awesome dances.finally it was our turn to do the bogos I was so scared I did not won’t to do it but I was brave so I went and done it was amazingly cool.
I felt so proud I could just burst into bits of chocolate.