Wednesday, 15 October 2014

My Holiday

" morning dad " I jumped into my shorts and then we went to skate park. Then my dad called us to go to him he  told us " told us to go to the beach".We went home so we could pack some food
and togs so we can splash in the water . I didn't get wet . I was the one who found the big juicy pipis. Everybody was happy. 

Monday, 6 October 2014

My lego story

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once upon a time there was a boy named Josh and a girl named ataahua they followed a lady that looked familiar to ataahua she walked them to the forest of doom they ask ‘’where are we going’’ she replied ‘’we are going to the forest of doom’’ what we are scared of the forest of doom.
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Then snakes started to slither
around Josh he started to scream and something started to climb up ataahua she thought that her brother was tickling her then she saw Josh in the circle of snakes
‘’ohno’’it’s a taranchula ’haaaaaa’’  ‘’It a sp sp sp spider get off go go jump off’’ they were doomed.
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‘’come on josh lets get out of here’’
‘’you are so right ataahua’’ well what are you waiting for let’s get out of here so they ran and ran and ran until they out of the forest of doom we were lucky to get out of there alive are you serious I was being funny haha.

Friday, 1 August 2014

show don't tell

PURPOSE to describe

WALT show not tell in our writing

last week we were doing show don't tell can you guess what emotion this character is feeling
last week we were learning how to show a emotion with out telling the adonis  
next time I should do better at writhing more 
what I think I done well was describing what the character felt like

She bit her fingernails as she was frozen like a statue she started to curl into a tiny little table tennis ball .With her lips glued together.Thinking of what will happen when she gets out of this huge mess….   

Friday, 25 July 2014

Mana whenua

have been working on a poster

our  theme  was mana  whenua. We  done  this because  people 

can do what we have written.

I think that we have done well with the colour. What I think we should with the colour. What I think we should work better on presentation.  


Friday, 27 June 2014

The little white door animation

Here is a animation that our hole class done a story that the class worked hard I think I done well with the start. I think I should work better at finishing my  animations when I do other  Here I the link  animation

Friday, 13 June 2014

Success Recount

You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.  
Describe a time we were successful
Success Criteria
Have you remembered…
- start with something that was said or thought
- Use punctuation (capital letters to start sentences and names and fullstops to end)
- to put everything in the right order
- use describing words and lots of detail.
- Re-read it to check it makes sense

don’t make a mistake’’I thought  in my head I was do the bongos at Room 17’s assembly at tawharanui. First  Room 17 was sitting so lovely sitting on the stage.Next  some girls done a awesome dances.finally it was our turn to do the bogos I was so scared I did not won’t to do it but I was brave  so I went and done it was amazingly cool.

I felt  so proud I could just burst into bits of chocolate.

Friday, 6 June 2014

Don't be bully's

Here is a move that I made from this website called Dvolver Movies. Here is the link.

Dvolver Movie


Friday, 30 May 2014

Room 17 Assembly


On Wednesday it was room 17 assembly some girls done  a dance and me  and some other boys done the bongos. The girls that were doing the dance were kiana,Journey,Liona,Mihi and waimarama the people that were doing the bongos were Maurice,Dale,Coby and me. I was  refereed

Friday, 16 May 2014

Bio poem

                                Bio poem 

Loves being happy,joyful and having fun
The daughter of Manga and Lilian.
Loves playing on the chromebook and coming to school.                                                          
sometimes feels Joyful,happiness,Thankful.
Is scared of  Homework,brothers,huge trees  
Really wants to be famous at singing.
Want to helps people  in the world
lives in Kaikohe.

Thinks that TUNA ROCKS!!!

Friday, 9 May 2014

The wave pools

WALT recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we felt.

 On a sunny Wednesday me and  my sister and her crew went to the wave pools.
We all went down the huge slide our favourite one was the blue slide because it goes longer.  When the big waves started I went  to dive under the humongous waves  and the waves pushed me under water. When i dived I could go to the deep  end and play with the big girls and boys. Then the waves Stopped so we  could go on the slide. I was so relieved   I thought that I could not go on but I was old enough to go on the slide and have a ride. I thought the slide was  amazingly cool.

Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Leaning Reflection Term 1 2014

Learning Reflection Term 1 2014

Answer the questions below honestly, and give yourself a happy face or sad face for each.

What was your best moment in term one? Why?
My best moment was open the box day because
I can do all my work on one thing.
What was the most important thing you learnt?
Do not  trusted pop up’s because it will lead you in
to trouble.

What subject do you do the best in this term and why?
My favourite subject to do is working on my chrome book
because you can play games and work to.

What subject did you not do so well in and why?

The subject that I did not do well was writing because I had to ask people for help.

Did I manage my time wisely this term? How ? e.g. finishing most tasks, working independently.
I did manage some of my writing and  some of my inquiry as well as last year.

What can I do differently next term to improve? Why?
Make my writing more tide so I can be one for the best  writings in the class.

Give yourself smiley faces out of 10 to show how well you have done this term: 91